It did deserve much thought, like a night with you.
So, I say goodnight.
Thought provoked by much feeling on show and shared.
It shall continue for at least one night.
Not to say that it will not be present in the back lots of mediocrity.
I’m young, yes, are you feeling okay?
I often wonder about life and how I should go about it.
I guess most people do.
Other men huh? Well, one could argue; what on earth are you talking about?
Bang! Like it was nothing, nothing of importance, held no meaning.
Much like power, I mean people question it everyday, do they not?
Nothing of relevance to you my love.
I would let you go.
However, the act of just letting you be is far more easier.
People often yell, people often scream, some call.
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"what one earth are you talking about?" -rulumu- 2009-10-15 13:38:11
Many grammar errors actually change the meaning of sentences. Really. Honest. So, I think you're saying goodnight after she told you to go away, and promising to come back tomorrow whether she wants you to or not, just to make sure she really means it. Am I close?
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a bit? -royo- 2009-10-14 21:49:41
but your explanation does help letting your mind wander is a great exercise, and then put in the bottom drawer and be embarrassed three weeks later but, you can also sometimes pull good ideas from spews like this after all, they are YOUR real ideas as if seen through some kind of teenage Hubble all I'm saying is, if you actually want to write not just whine over girls who will, or will not fuck, that messy creativity is a good start
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I struggled to read this thing. -zendog3- 2009-10-14 20:40:23
I had to read it twice; some sentences four times. When you put something up, you are asking other people to take the time to read what you have to say. Frankly, if you are asking someone to give their time and attention to your writing, you really owe them the courtesy of, at least, a casual editing job. I am sure this was written in deep emotion and your angst is what you want to show by posting your work unedited, but it is difficult to get into your world through the careless typing.
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